After sharing my stories with the class I got a lot more feedback and it helped me draft the section where I planned on writing more about my main book, which is called cancer vixen. A started to brainstorm what I want the focal points of my paper to be, while still having some secondary source in this draft. This draft I wanted feedback on mainly the quotes I pulled out from the book, is my analysis supporting the quote enough, and is the quote and analysis helping support my main argument.
what I had left before I submit my paper was mainly just organizing the paper as a whole, how can I make the paper flow, when I reread it does everything make sense. is there any quotes that are missing something to them. these were also my main concerns to this paper and my drafting process.
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