Draft 1 – This is something

I am a creature of habit, I am somebody who never drafts before writing my paper, only ever doing it in high school when it was a grade. This draft was on one of my secondary sources and it helped with seeing how I can incorporate my other sources into supporting my evidence since the main focus of my paper I wanted to be about both of my books.

the feedback I wanted for my first drafting is if the secondary source is even needed, does it connect well with my thesis and my stories as a whole, can it back up my argument. my next drafting process is to focus more on writing about both of my stories, since I will have shared my stories with the class I will have more feedback on thesis ideas and what may be interesting to add.